Hey Bloggers!
Today my class did an E Asttle test.
When we completed the test, we were allowed to do a free write.
When I finished, I still has quite a lot of time before everyone should have been finished.
So, this is the free write that I did.
I'm really proud of the fact that I've made it really interesting and given it a few cliffhangers.
I think I have created a lot of effect using the cliffhangers.
I'm only wanting feedback right now though.
What do you think?
What do I need to change about my story and why?
Anyway, that's all for now.
Bye!
Hello Dion, it's Will here from Grey Main. I like this writing but next time you could screenshot your work and put it on your post. Overall this was a good piece of writing.
ReplyDeleteWill.