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Tuesday, August 28, 2018

Acrostic poem

Dan the man. You always have a smile and try to make people laugh.


Awesome. You are awesome in every way.


Never give up. You always try to be the best you can be.


Impossible. To you it’s impossible to stop trying.


Just about every hour of your life includes me and Amy.


Accurate, you try to keep yourself accurate in every possible way you can.


Creative and clean. You are creative with sketches and artwork.
You like to keep the house tidy, the way you like it.


Incredible, you are the best and most amazing mum in the universe.  


Nice. You are nice, kind and an extraordinary person.


Delightful. You like to be delightful and loving.

Able. I believe you’re able to do anything and everything. I love you and nothing can stop me.

8 comments:

  1. Kia, ora Milla here from Gilberthorpe School. Nice work maybe you could make it smaller don't worry I have had this happen to me loads haha.
    Anyways well done from- Milla

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  2. Hey Dion I really like how you did your acrostic poem but I couldn't read it because of the size, but its okay because it seems like that you have done really good on the poem, and I'm sure that Dani will like this.

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  3. hey doin I can't read it because of the size and when you seed that you are the best mum in the universe do you mean dani or your mum because I don't get it BLOG YOU LATTER!!!!!!!!

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  4. Hi Dion Jesse here you know that you did your acrostic poem about Dani if you read through it you write you are the most amazing mum in the universe so you mite want to fix that to Dani. BLOG YOU LATER!!!

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  5. Kia Ora, Dion i really like your poem you did a good job, I dont think you need to do anything next time keep doing what your doing!

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  6. Kia ora Dion, I like how you wrote a acrostic poem of Dani. Next time you could just copy and paste it on to your blog.FROM KEISHA

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  7. Hi there, my name is Zion and I am a student in room Waitemata at Waikowhai Primary School. I really liked reading your poem. You have used interesting words. It made me think of when I performed a poem for the poem competition. Have you thought about using a different colour? If you would like to see my learning, my blog is http://http://wpszionl.blogspot.com/. blogspot.co.nz.

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