One day I was walking down the street and the sun was setting behind the trees.Then suddenly a Mummy with five Zombies came running towards me!!! One Zombie was light green ,another was brown and the fourth Zombie was black.The fifth was blue.The Mummy looked like a tall woman wrapped in toilet paper.I ran home,kitty locked the front and back doors.I realised I was trapped.In five or ten mins it would be 5:00.That’s when I go to bed. *a few months later* “Im home.” “Hi”they all said at the same time. “LOOK OUT!!!!!” “What” I said. *stabs*
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Hey Dion! What a great story! I love the detail you have described the characters with. I wonder why the came back? I think the mummy would be the scariest!
ReplyDeleteHi there Dion, my name is Aki, I go to Te Kura O Waima. I really liked your post. I liked how you used the coloured words to show the colour of the zombies. I found this interesting because I could vision this in my mind. How did you feel when you were writing this? Have you thought of making the google doc bigger so people can see your amazing work next time? I would like to read more of your posts in the future.
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i like the zombies and toilet paper on it and i read the story and it had green zombie and blue and brown from lukas
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