Monday, March 13, 2017
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hi it is me sophie de you oley pot this on to day de case i tis awasome it mack me happy you have to do aver on eabout a ever thing you do them awasome lie so can you plz do a ave rone for me plz tha tis awasome i like it that is the end from me
ReplyDeleteHey Dion, Miss M here. This is a great piece of work, you have used descriptive words and it is interesting to read, ka pai! The facts you have used to give your story more meaning are good. Next time you could make your blog post more interesting by explaining what you were learning or sharing what the purpose was for writing at the beginning.
ReplyDeleteSUP DUDE! Noah here THAT fire was SOOO BIG! its sad that guy died well anyway BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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