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Friday, June 28, 2019

Tree Sentence Poems!!

Hey bloggers!
Oh, do I have news for you!
Treeday I have done some poems about...
Trees!
*Yay!*
These are my two best poems so far (I'm wanting feedback please).




I'm still working on this though.
Have you done this sort of thing before?
Send me your poems for feedback!
Anyway, Bye!

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  1. AnonymousJuly 29, 2019 at 12:07 PM

    Hi Dion, I'm Bella from Yaldhurst model school in Rimu.
    I like your poem but you said you had two but you don't. I would maybe put in to or say I only did one, but apart from that it's really good.
    WELL DONE!!!
    kind regards,
    Bella.

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