Hey Bloggers!
Today my class did an E Asttle test.
When we completed the test, we were allowed to do a free write.
When I finished, I still has quite a lot of time before everyone should have been finished.
So, this is the free write that I did.
I'm really proud of the fact that I've made it really interesting and given it a few cliffhangers.
I think I have created a lot of effect using the cliffhangers.
I'm only wanting feedback right now though.
What do you think?
What do I need to change about my story and why?
Anyway, that's all for now.
Bye!
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