Hi Dion, Hunter here. The thing I like about this post is that you want run faster. This reminded me athletics last year. I wasn't able to compete because I had severs in my heals. Some advice for running faster is to just run around at your house more often. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!
Kia Ora Dion, I liked the way you added hidden minecraft witches on each slide. The facts you have used are really good. I like that you did a great job on your examples of writing. How come your goals are really short, you should be more specific about your goals.
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Kia ora Dion
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Hi Dion, Hunter here. The thing I like about this post is that you want run faster. This reminded me athletics last year. I wasn't able to compete because I had severs in my heals. Some advice for running faster is to just run around at your house more often. That's all from me BLOG YOU LATER!!!
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Dion,
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you added hidden minecraft witches on each slide. The facts you have used are really good. I like that you did a great job on your examples of writing. How come your goals are really short, you should be more specific about your goals.
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